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Writing Tips

Short, practical rules for writing content customers actually read.

You don't need to be a copywriter. Follow these few rules and your content will beat most websites.

The five rules

  1. Say what the customer can do next. Every page should end in an obvious action.
  2. Use the names customers see in booking. If they book "Wash & Fold", never call it "WF Standard" anywhere.
  3. Keep paragraphs to two or three sentences. People scan on phones.
  4. Be specific. "Pickup within Quezon City, Mon-Sat" beats "serving your area with quality solutions".
  5. Promise only what you can fulfill today. The website is a contract written in advance.

Before and after

Weak: We offer a wide variety of excellent solutions for your needs.

Better: Wash & Fold includes washing, drying, and folding everyday laundry. Choose pickup and delivery where available in your area.

Weak: Click here · More · Submit

Better: View laundry services · Book pickup · Contact support

The button should say what happens when it's pressed.

Weak title: Home

Better title: Laundry Services

Better description: Book laundry pickup, cleaning, and delivery services from FortuneServing.

Write it for someone deciding whether to click, and keep it honest to the page.

Tone

Warm, useful, confident. A little personality is welcome; confusion is not.

  • Fine: Need clean laundry without the extra errand? Schedule a pickup.
  • Too much: Laundry chaos? We shall heroically rescue your socks from doom.

Never publish

  • Placeholder text ("lorem ipsum", "TODO", "hours here").
  • Internal shorthand, codes, or team nicknames.
  • Claims you cannot currently fulfill (services, areas, hours, prices).
  • Private details, such as staff personal numbers, customer names, or internal notes.